Hey guys you wont miss out something good weekend holidays today I did something good I went to timezone and play in my Xbox one I play call of duty advanced warfare realm Royal warface and rogue company .
Kia ora Zoheb,Time zone is a pretty cool place.I think you are lucky and should be thank full but then you even played on your x box. That is pretty cool.Not being mean but if you want to you could write longer sentences.From Semisi
Wow,Timezone is amazing. Really cool place. I've heard of it but haven't been to it. Maybe you could tell me some stuff about it. And Xbox's are really cool. This is a really good blog
Hi Zoheb! My name is Ibrahim. I played hockey with you. I haven't been to Timezone, but it sounds pretty cool! Some of your sentences didn't make sense, so maybe you could improve in that in the future.
Thanks for sharing your post! I like that you have used capitals. Can you try and add some full stops to make some sentences? What have you been doing during lockdown?
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Kia ora Zoheb,Time zone is a pretty cool place.I think you are lucky and should be thank full but then you even played on your x box. That is pretty cool.Not being mean but if you want to you could write longer sentences.From Semisi
ReplyDeleteWow,Timezone is amazing. Really cool place. I've heard of it but haven't been to it. Maybe you could tell me some stuff about it. And Xbox's are really cool. This is a really good blog
ReplyDeleteHi Zoheb! My name is Ibrahim. I played hockey with you. I haven't been to Timezone, but it sounds pretty cool! Some of your sentences didn't make sense, so maybe you could improve in that in the future.
ReplyDeleteHi Zoheb. This was really intresting. But maybe you could improve by saying what games you played at Timezone. But good blog!
ReplyDeleteHi Zoheb,
ReplyDeleteI haven't been timezone before but it sounds fun! What type of games did you play in timezone?
hi zoheb,
ReplyDeletenice blog and I haven't been in timezone but is it like a arcade?
Hey Zoheb
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your post!
I like that you have used capitals. Can you try and add some full stops to make some sentences?
What have you been doing during lockdown?
Can’t wait to hear!
Hi Zoheb,
ReplyDeleteI never got to go to timezone.
You are very luley that you get to go to time zone.
Good job.